Write a letter (≈ 30 words) to your pen friend and describe your school to him/her. (You can use Ex. 2, Step 6.)
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ГДЗ Английский язык 7 класс (часть 1) Афанасьева. UNIT 1. Step 6. Номер №11
Решение
Перевод задания
Напиши письмо (≈30 слов) своему другу по переписке и опиши свою школу ему/ей. (Ты можешь использовать упр.2, шаг 6)
ОТВЕТ
Dear Bob,
In this letter I’d like to tell you about my wonderful school. It is not very big. But despite that we have a lunch room, gym and special classes for each subject. There are about six hundred pupils and thirty teachers in my school. My school is very beautiful, because it is decorated by different plants. Hope you will be able to see it one day.
Best wishes,
Kirill
Перевод ответа
Дорогой Боб,
В этом письме я хотел бы рассказать тебе о моей замечательной школе. Она не очень большая. Но, несмотря на это, у нас есть обеденный зал, тренажерный зал и специальные классы для каждого предмета. В моей школе около шестисот учеников и тридцать учителей. Моя школа очень красивая, потому что она украшена разными растениями. Надеюсь, ты сможешь увидеть ее однажды.
С наилучшими пожеланиями,
Кирилл
We
thank you for an enquiry for our product …
In reply to your enquiry for …
We
feel sure that you will be interested in …
Thank
you for your letter of…
in
which you express your interest in our product
We
thank you for your enquiry for …
and
would like to inform you that we can
make you an offer
May
we draw your attention to the enclosed samples of products
manufactured
by our company
By
today’s post we have sent you samples of…
You
will be interested to hear about our latest products that we have
just introduced
onto die market
We
have pleasure in offering you
6. Write a letter using phrases given below. • write an order
We
thank you for
of
9
May
enclosing the sample of your product
We
have pleasure in informing you that your quotation for …
was
received by us, and now we enclose our orderl
…
We
thank you for your quotation of 6th May for…
and
are pleased to accept
it
We
are pleased to establish business relationships and are placing an
order
for
…with you
We
wish to place a trial order for…
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In confirmation of our telephone conversation of… We are pleased to enclose our trial order for… With you
We
are looking forward to your prompt confirmation of the order Please
dispatch as quickly as possible
We
would be much obliged if you would supply the following as soon as
possible
We
find however that the prices you have quoted are too high …
The
alternative
is for you to adjust your prices by reducing them by 5%
We
shall be glad if you acknowledge acceptance of our order and of the
conditions
stated above
Enclosed
you will find our order‘
Attached
to this you will find…
7. Write a letter using phrases given below.
• write
a letter of confirmation of
-
a
previous agreement /
arrangement, -
of
shipment of goods,-of
order;
• a
letter acknowledging receipt of some document, payment
We
are very happy to have your trial order for …
We
thank you very much for the catalogue contained in your letter
We
have for acknowledgement your order‘
for
…
We
are writing to confirm our previous arrangement for/about…
We
are in receipt of your order
We
acknowledge with thanks receipt of your post remittance
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In
confinnation of our telephone conversation last night …
Thank
you for your cheque ft»….
Please
acknowledge receipt of…
We
are pleased to advise you that the goods will be delivered to…
promptly
We
are sending you our confirmation that…
I
was pleased to receive your telex dated …
Further
to our telephone conversation …
9.
Write
letters using phrases given below.
•
write
invitations and answer them using cards given below.
In celebration of the Birthday of His Majesty the Emperor of Japan
the
Ambassador of Japan and Mrs Koji Watanabe request
the pleasure of the company of
at
a Reception on
Wednesday, December 20,
1995
from
12:00
to
14:00
at
«Olympic Penta Renaissance Hotel»
Please
bring this card with you
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Ответ:
Dear Alice,
In your letter you ask to help you to change your habits and start economizing. I think, I can give you some advice.
First of all, you need to cut back on unnecessary spending. Avoid buying double latte coffee every morning on your way to work. It would be better if you get up a little bit earlier and prepare breakfast yourself. Omlette or porridge with a cup of coffee will provide you with good energy till lunchtime.
Next step is creating a budget for yourself and sticking to it. Think over how much money is coming in and how much of it is spent on unhealthy and expensive food during lunchtime.
The last advice I want to give you is being content with the simple things in life. Is it necessary to spend a lot of money in expensive restaurants? How about cooking a nutritious dinner rather than going out to the restaurant for food. Invite your friends to your place, try homemade food, turn on the music, dance and talk.
I hope I could help you. Good luck!
All the best,
Liliya
Дорогая Алиса,
В своем письме ты просишь помочь тебе изменить твои привычки и начать экономить. Думаю, я могу тебе дать совет. В первую очередь, тебе необходимо перестать тратить деньги на ненужные вещи. Старайся не покупать двойной кофе Латте утром по дороге на работу. Будет лучше, если ты встанешь пораньше и приготовишь завтрак сама. Омлет или каша с чашкой кофе обеспечит тебе энергию до самого обеда.
Следующий шаг – это создание собственного бюджета и следование ему. Подумай, сколько денег приходит и какая часть этих денег тратится на нездоровую и дорогую еду во время обеда.
Последний совет, который я хочу тебе дать – это понимать смысл всего окружающего в твоей жизни. Зачем тратить деньги в дорогих ресторанах? Как насчет того, чтобы приготовить ужин дома, чем пойти в ресторан? Пригласи своих друзей домой, угости их домашней пищей, включите музыку, потанцуйте и пообщайтесь.
Я надеюсь, что смогла чем-то помочь тебе. Удачи!
Всего наилучшего,
Лиля
Объяснение:
IELTS General Writing Task 1
IELTS Writing
IELTS General Writing Task 1
How to write IELTS letters for a High IELTS Band Score
✓ Identify the kind of letter the questions requires as a response before you start writing. There are three types of IELTS letters:
- formal
- semi-formal
- informal
Choosing the correct tone for your response is critical for a high IELTS score.
✓ Choose the correct opening and closing for your IELTS letter. Each type of IELTS letter needs the appropriate opening/greeting, lexical resource/vocabulary/transition words/grammatical range, and closing sentence or phrase. Here are some examples:
- Letter type | Formal
- A letter to a person you do not know/have never met.
- Opening: Dear Sir, (man) / Dear Madam, (woman)
- Closing: Yours faithfully
- Letter type | Semi-formal
- To a person you may/ may not know, but you know their last name.
- Opening: Dear Mr. Smith, / Dear Ms. Johnson,
- Closing: Yours sincerely
- Letter type | Informal
- To a person you know well
- Opening: Dear Mike, / Dear Susan,
- Closing: Best regards / All the best
Begin a formal or semi-formal letter using a formal introductory sentence.
Trying to be friendly is inappropriate because you do not know the person you are writing the letter to.
Use the introductory sentence to explain the purpose of your letter:
Dear Sir, (or Dear madam,)
- I am writing to enquire about…
- I am writing in response to…
- I am writing in connection with…
- I am writing in order to…
Dear Mr. Smith,
- I am writing to complain about…
- I am writing in relation to…
✓ Begin informal letters using an introductory sentence or two in a friendly tone. Then introduce the reason why you are writing to this person.
Example informal letter opening lines
Dear Susan,
Thanks for your last letter with all the news. It was great to hear about everything you’ve been doing and I’m sure you’ll be really happy with the new apartment. I‘ve got some good news too – that’s why I’m writing to you …
✓ Make the purpose of your letter clear. Is it to ask for something? Is it to enquire about something? Is it a letter requesting information? Is it to complain about something? Is it to thank someone for something? Try to learn the normal phrases people use to support such a purpose.
✓ People often use standard phrases when writing letters and to express opinions (and when speaking). Many IELTS candidates find it difficult to fully complete the IELTS General writing task 1 in the time allowed, because they spend a lot of time thinking about what to say. You can save a lot of time in IELTS preparation by learning the standard phrases people use in real life for IELTS letter writing.
✓ The IELTS General writing task 1 letter requires you to write a minimum of 150 words. You should practice IELTS letter writing until you are confident that you can write a good letter with a minimum of 150 words and under 20 minutes, which is the time limit. If you write less than 150 words – marks will be deducted from your score, but you will not be penalized if you write more than 150 words.
✓ Spelling in IELTS writing is important. You will lose marks for incorrect spelling, so it makes sense to learn how to spell common words used in letters correctly.
✓ Focus on the question. If the questions asks you to do something – do it, and do not write about other things which are not relevant. You need to use a little imagination in General IELTS Task 1 letter writing; however, focus on the information given in the question prompt and do not get distracted by overly complicating unnecessary details.
✓ Make sure you respond to all the points mentioned in the question. There are usually three bullet points. If your letter does not address one of the points mentioned in the question – marks will be deducted from your final score.
Practice writing several IELTS Writing Task 1 letters against the clock — no more than 20 minutes. You should aim to leave a few minutes to check grammar/spelling and that you have answered each bullet point in the question.
Examples of transition words used in letter writing to link sentences and paragraphs
As part of your IELTS preparation, you should learn to use transition words effectively in your writing.
- moreover
- in addition
- furthermore
- additionally
- not to mention
- likewise
- in the same vein
- again
- also
- and
- as well as
- because
- before
- but (this one is a bit more informal)
- despite that
- finally
- furthermore (this one is a bit more formal)
- hence (this one is a bit more formal)
- in contrast
- on the other hand
- otherwise
- conversely
- instead
- however
- nevertheless
- notwithstanding
- on the contrary
- still
- yet
IELTS General Writing Task 1 Letter Writing Examples
This is a collection of IELTS letter writing questions and sample answers from the IELTS General Training Writing Test. Writing Task 1 requires you to write a letter of approximately 150 words in response to a situation described in the question.
The situation may be writing a letter to a friend, writing a letter to complain about something or writing a letter to request information; therefore, your writing style needs to be appropriate, either informal if writing to a friend, or formal if writing to a business or someone in authority.
Clearly, there are many possible ways to respond to these IELTS Writing Task 1 questions; however, the following examples should give you some idea of how to approach the task and what is required.
IELTS General Training Writing Task 1
TYPE: informal, letter to a friend model answers
- Writing Task 1 — Going to another country to study
- Writing Task 1 — Starting an import/export business
- Writing Task 1 — Invitation to a music concert
- Writing Task 1 — Postponing a visit
- Writing Task 1 — Describing your new house
- Writing Task 1 — Job vacancy in multinational company
- Writing Task 1 — Describing your new job
TYPE: semi-formal model answers
IELTS sample letters
- IELTS General Writing Task 1 — Letter to school principal — help maintain school building
open - IELTS General Writing Task 1 — Letter to headmaster | son’s absence from class
- IELTS General Writing Task 1 — Letter to a college | giving a talk to students
- IELTS General Writing Task 1 — Letter to your boss | working from home
- IELTS General Writing Task 1 — Letter to a colleague | overseas trip
- IELTS General Writing Task 1 — Letter to a museum | historical object
- IELTS General Writing Task 1 — Complaint letter about a product
- IELTS General Writing Task 1 -complaining about a damaged product
TYPE: formal model answers
- IELTS General Task 1 Writing — Letter to a company | job application research assistant
- IELTS General Task 1 Writing — Letter to a company | insurance claim
- IELTS General Task 1 Writing — Letter to a company | faulty computer
- IELTS General Task 1 Writing — Letter to a company | general complaint letter
- IELTS General Task 1 Writing — Letter to a company | work experience opportunity
IELTS Letter Writing Template
Formal letter
IELTS Sample Letters/Model Answers
Write a letter complaining about a damaged product
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complain about the BBQ Grill and Smoker that I recently bought from your company. I have been a customer of yours for many years and was excited when I found out you had expanded into new markets.
However, when my order arrived, it had some problems with it. One of the wheels on the bottom was jammed and wouldn’t revolve at all. So I contacted customer service to see what could be done about this issue. After sending in pictures as proof of the damage, they told me they would send a replacement part but not until next week, and there were no guarantees that it wouldn’t happen again!
It’s disappointing because I just spent $400 on this product and now can’t use it at all. Can you please look into this matter? And please let me know if there is a way to solve this problem to prevent it from happening again.
Yours faithfully,
John Doe
How is general training IELTS task 1 letter writing scored?
Task achievement: The examiner will look for task achievement first. They will check if you have addressed all parts of the task, presented and organized your information clearly, used a range of vocabulary appropriate to the task, and used an appropriate register throughout.
Coherence and cohesion: The examiner will also assess how well your letter flows. Good flow includes making sure that each paragraph has a clear focus and smoothly leads on from the one before, as well as using a range of linking words and phrases to connect your ideas coherently.
Lexical resource: As well as looking at the overall range of vocabulary and word choice you use, the examiner will also take note of any more advanced lexis (vocabulary) that you use.
Grammatical range: The examiner will look at the range of different grammatical structures that you use in your letter. The examiner will look for a good range of sentence types, as well as a variety of clauses (e.g., relative clauses, time clauses, conditionals, etc.).
Punctuation: Punctuation is important to help the reader understand your letter. The examiner will look for a good range of punctuation marks and check that you have used them correctly.